Wednesday, September 10, 2008

FOUR TAKES


Painting by S. Auberle
FOUR TAKES
It's a dark and stormy night.
Cut.
It's a sad and moonless night.
Cut.
It's a rainy night in Georgia.
Cut.
This isn't Georgia,
Ray Charles has left the building,
storms passed,
lightning and thunder ceased.
Nothing left now
but slow rhythm of rain,
one distant wailing train song,
Hank Williams pain song,
somebody done somebody
wrong song.
I fall
asleep.
Cut.
- mimi

1 Comments:

Blogger Bruce Hodder said...

I can hear "Luckenbach Texas" in my head now. Lovely, as always.

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